It was 12 midnight. I awoke and yawned tiredly, ready to begin. I went out to the dark valleys and waited for beautiful, young women to appear. They were the best targets to strike. Finally, one was coming. I took off my cloak and walked towards her. Then, I sank my fangs into her neck.
Wow, so violent. I thought the person was a rapist at first!
ReplyDeleteOne twist you might have used was:
ReplyDeleteI was just about to sink my fangs in when mother yelled, "Albert, put away your Dracula toys and come for supper!"
My thoughts were same as Seong Jin's. Nice twist.
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